the music kicked ass i loved it.
you tried hard to re create a battle sequence. but, it just didnt seem right having everyone stand around watching a guy in the middle get killed. dont u know about movie clips? you could do that to show guys fighting in the background. i loved that song played, it worked on so many levels. that dancer chick, she bit his arm off, i expected some wicked punches and kicks, but, she bit his arm off. holy crap, still that was cool. also i think you used that noise when a guy dies too many times, you already do voices, just do some yelling noises itll be much better believe me.
email me if youre not sure how to do movie clips, ill explain it, and yes i know how for everyone else. i just havnt made a movie with it yet. i get the feeling Thidius (is that how its spelled?) gets killed, please dont kill him.